Wednesday, July 11, 2012

Sonnot x+11: Rusting

There's a hot tub full of three years of what the wind blows
Or the rain leaves behind.  No one quite knows
What that damp old thing is coated in.
What grows still in unkempt idleness once bubbled with sin.

So too idle rests a dust-bearded beer sign,
Pilfered from a college bar for its neon light
Under which parties once roamed, mindless and wild.
Now it sits in the attic, out of use, out of style

On top of the pool table, riddled with scratches.
Memories of playing there come in jerks and snatches,
Half-passed out with drunkenness, trying trick shots on dares.
I can hardly recall all the girls I had there.

Here lie the bachelor's artifacts, rusting,
Given up, one can hope, for someone worth trusting.

2 comments:

  1. Why thank you. You're very kind.

    The inspiration for this was quite literal and straightforward. I worked a job at a house with a hot tub out back filled with leaves. The guy has two young kid and the hot tub had a covering of a damp-looking coating of indeterminate composition and origin.

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